Talk:Rai/@comment-6278148-20130825143436

Approved, a few spelling mistake here and there

(After th'e tragic death of her moth'er, Kamiko ha's lived with her 4 older brothers and her father. Her father wasn't a wealthy man and with her moh'er'gone, th'ey didn't get alot of money.)

should be :

''After the tragic death of her mother, Kamiko has lived with her 4 older brothers and her Father. Her Father wasn't a wealthy man and with her mother gone, they didn't get alot of money. ''

''Just watch out on the " ' " you use! Otherwise, looks fantastic. ''